Goodbye, Summer (Pencil+Final Draft Comparison)

Here is the original version of rizhnir.deviantart.com/art/Goo… .

A secret:  Originally Camarra (character on the left) was drawn as Arias, a white-haired elf who is a main character in my parallel comic.  I switched it out with Camarra from another original comic because the two paired together look better.  You can see the erasing of the elf ears as evidence.

I also altered several things, such as facial expressions, whose hand is over whose, the tale, outfits, and a couple of other tiny details in case anyone's interested.